Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Talking to a Ghost

Eric, I like the hook and I love the catchy tune. However I was completely lost. True, there are too many pronouns but I think I would have been lost anyway. If you explained the song I would probably get it and that might work in a coffee house setting... Read More

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Start Living

Good start Dennis. You could chase the idea that when you get older all that really matters is memories and that you have to make them when you are young or it’s too late. Also, like I once heard, there are no luggage racks on hearses. From everything I... Read More

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Everything

I think this is a good beginning and is certainly a starting point of a good story. What I am most impressed with is Dick’s feedback! You could write a dozen songs just answering the questions he posted. His approach is one that will work with even the vaguest... Read More

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Willy Don't Need No Shoes

Thanks Robert. It was indeed meant to be hyperbolous but I didn’t know how to spell it! Or should that be hyperbolic, nah that’s a mathematical thing. Anyway, thanks for the comment!

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on What's Your Alibi Tonight

Earl, Thanks for listening and commenting. I think you have some good suggestions there although apparently they go with one of my other songs! I’ll try a slower version.