Orion DiFranco gave feedback on Love Me

Well done sir.  I would like to hear some sort of vocal build up in the second or third chorus (maybe add a little bit drums).  Lyrically this song is great.  I read it over a few times and It makes sense.  My favorite line is “... Read More

Orion DiFranco gave feedback on Absolute Eyes

Lachelle, Charlie and Don, The song is about listening and promising not to let someone down again.  Maybe I should keep the title as falling down?  What should the emotion sound like ?  In my mind I tried my best to explain and deliver the sense of forgiveness... Read More

Orion DiFranco gave feedback on Suffocator

Lachelle, I also hear a cello slowly waving in and out of this song.  I enjoy the way you sing.  Especially at the end of each VS line.

Orion DiFranco gave feedback on Lost in Your Love

Well done spencer.

Orion DiFranco gave feedback on Dont Leave

Dick, It’s so interesting to see someone explain things so easily. When you write about someone else’s song they should listen. Great advice again and again.  Also thank you Eric and Andrew.