This is my first demo for 2020, and I could not be more pleased. I wrote this to pitch to artists such as Dierks Bentley and Brothers Osbourne.
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Wow Marvin I love this song. Great melody, lyrics and feel all the way through. I could imagine listening to this on the radio in the future. Awesome man!
February 26, 2020
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Whether a regular sinner, or considered a saint
Or live in between temptation and restraint
Only you know what you are and what you ain’t
This ride through life can be like a runaway train
It’ll travel faster with every passin’ year
There’s no brake to pull so you gotta learn to steer
It’ll test your faith to arrive on time not late
This ride through life can be like a runaway train
The speed of life makes it all a short ride
And the ticket’s only good one-way, one-time
You’re judged by how you live not how you explain
The ride you take through life on the runaway train
Every scar and mark just proves that you’re alive
As a testament to your power to survive
Cause at the start that end looks further away
This ride through life can be like a runaway train
The speed of life makes it all a short ride
And the ticket’s only good one-way, one-time
You’re judged by how you live not how you explain
The ride you take through life on the runaway train
What I’ve learned about this ride - from travelers come and gone
Is no matter how you live it - the train will still roll on
The speed of life makes it all a short ride
And the ticket’s only good one-way, one-time
You’re judged by how you live not how you explain
The ride you take through life on the runaway train
At this age I know what I am and I ain’t
That’s how you get this far through life on the runaway train
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Good song. Good melody. Good message.
Really nice chord change and melody on that second line of the chorus. That hooked me in good.
Killer sounding demo. I am jealous of that demo.
Great job.
February 04, 2020
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Wow Marvin I love this song. Great melody, lyrics and feel all the way through. I could imagine listening to this on the radio in the future. Awesome man!
February 26, 2020
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Rick Lane
Good song. Good melody. Good message.
Really nice chord change and melody on that second line of the chorus. That hooked me in good.
Killer sounding demo. I am jealous of that demo.
Great job.
February 04, 2020
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