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February 13, 2014

Mary Segato gave feedback on Lost in Your Love

Hi Spencer, this is a great song, I love that “Bee Gees” feel harmonizing.  My 17 yr. old daughter was also listening and really liked it too.  I agree with Dick, the first line of the second verse is not that clear in its meaning. Really nice song

February 06, 2014

Mary Segato gave feedback on Settle Down

Really nice song Phill !  I can hear this song sticking with a natural acoustic sound. I really liked the line “I’ll try to make the wrong things right” and the fact that you got stronger there, maybe adding some other instrument as you build. Nice flow to this... Read More

February 06, 2014

Mary Segato gave feedback on The Music Tree

Benny, I really enjoyed your story.  I think speaking the first chorus is right as it sets the tone for the rest of the song.  I like that you end the song by singing it.

February 06, 2014

Mary Segato gave feedback on She Don't Call

Great song, so easy and relaxing to listen to.

February 06, 2014

Mary Segato gave feedback on Blacktop Ballroom

Meaghan, this is fantastic! Well done and good luck with it.

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