Joined: July 11, 2019
James Likes: 3 Songs
James Green gave feedback on My Angel - guitar vocal
Kriz; I hear what you’re thinking about a bridge, if not a bridge, maybe a step in the key and repeat the chorus a 2nd time with more emotion. Consider removing “Looking at” in the first line of the chorus (Maybe replace with “Oh my…) and hold the ... Read More
James Green gave feedback on The Light That's Leading Towards Tomorrow
Hello Kriztina; I am a sucker for a Baritone guitar. I like the song, I was just waiting for the rhymes in the verse. I know it’s not a requirement, just felt unresolved for me. Good music and harmonies throughout. Thanks for sharing
James Green gave feedback on Can't Do
Hello Carol; I like the rhythm of the song. The feel is today. I guess the problem, for me, is that it changes rhythm feeling between the verses and the chorus. Seems to go from straight to a triplet feel. Still sounds good, just made me... Read More
James Green gave feedback on Days Like These
Sweet song. My only comment is that there might be some sort of emotional payoff in the last chorus. Providing the build. Showing off the feelings of the situation. It’s sung well too. Good job man!!