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James Green

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July 30, 2019

James Green gave feedback on Days Like These

Sweet song.  My only comment is that there might be some sort of emotional payoff in the last chorus.  Providing the build.  Showing off the feelings of the situation.  It’s sung well too.  Good job man!!

July 25, 2019

James Green gave feedback on Lettin’ Go (country/bluegrass)

Nice Song!!

July 24, 2019

James Green gave feedback on My Angel - guitar vocal

Kriz; I hear what you’re thinking about a bridge, if not a bridge, maybe a step in the key and repeat the chorus a 2nd time with more emotion.  Consider removing “Looking at” in the first line of the chorus (Maybe replace with “Oh my…) and hold the ... Read More

July 23, 2019

James Green gave feedback on The Light That's Leading Towards Tomorrow

Hello Kriztina; I am a sucker for a Baritone guitar.  I like the song, I was just waiting for the rhymes in the verse.  I know it’s not a requirement, just felt unresolved for me.  Good music and harmonies throughout.  Thanks for sharing

July 23, 2019

James Green gave feedback on Can't Do

Hello Carol;  I like the rhythm of the song.  The feel is today.  I guess the problem, for me, is that it changes rhythm feeling between the verses and the chorus. Seems to go from straight to a triplet feel.  Still sounds good, just made me... Read More

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