Kriz Rogers gave feedback on Just South of Crazy (working lyric)

Great start! Looking forward to following the progress.

Kriz Rogers gave feedback on Honey Don’t-Do List

Hi, This is a cute title and song! What I would suggest would be to change one word in line two of verse one: “Hanging from it on a faded piece of paper” to “Hanging from it is a faded piece of paper” And I think it would help to... Read More

Kriz Rogers gave feedback on Out Here

I like the poetry in this song ... “...a lullaby we know in our bones…”  and “...roasting o’er the fire in our eyes and our souls…” The melody and subject definitely fall in the Folk genre. My favorite lines in the chorus are the last two, because they bring... Read More

Kriz Rogers gave feedback on The Light That's Leading Towards Tomorrow

Hi Dave, No, it does not rhyme in Swedish either lol ... Good to know about the Sheryl Crow song! I will check both that one and the one you wrote out. I do like internal rhymes, that make songs even more interesting to me. Thanks for your kind words, I... Read More

Kriz Rogers gave feedback on The Light That's Leading Towards Tomorrow

Thanks Brendan, it means a lot.