Bob Abner gave feedback on Tiny Angel (feat. Suzy Alexman)

1) Repetitious Chord pattern (and variations): E / C-sharp minor / F-sharp minor / B   [ 1 / 6- / 2- / 5 ] 2) Rhyme Scheme: “Time” and “Light” (in pre-chorus, for instance)— a rhyme scheme that happens as often as this one happens in your song—imho, would suggest not settling for this same “imperfect” rhyme scheme as often... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Jesus Is The Reason

Dori, thanks for the listen and the compliments—fwiw, I usually don’t think of myself as “clever”—sometimes annoying, obstreporous, full of goofy jokes—but clever is a new one!!!    Anyway, thanks!

Bob Abner gave feedback on Start All Over Again

Frank, thanks for listening and for the feedback!

Bob Abner gave feedback on When You Hold My Hand

1) QUITE NICE! 2) Nice relaxed feel and open honest lyrics (which helps listener to find you appealing) 3) Dori probably right when she says that (basically) the chorus needs to start strong (imho, an astute observation). 4) Makes me want to listen to more of your songs. 5) I liked it—good job!!!

Bob Abner gave feedback on Gone Can Get

1) REALLY INTERESTING! (very singular) 2) Great imagery in the lyrics. 3) Music also interesting. 4) I like it (though I wonder if contemporary radio will “take to it”). 5) Seems like a perfect home for this song would be in a documentary about Appalachian life (music bed for a scene where a young lady... Read More