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Bob Abner

August 04, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on Choices of the Heart

“Though I was a man of little persistence You were a woman prone to resistance”—Great line, BUT I would be tempted to get rid of the initial word “though” (as it’s not necessary)—overall, pretty solid.

August 03, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on Over A Drink

Bunches of things about this one to like—piano intro is a nice set-up, as it subtly prepares the listener for some “dark water ahead”—Song develops nicely—Singer has a voice very suited for this song—great lyric writing when “carrying on Over a drink, over a bottle of... Read More

August 03, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on Is That Her

VERY solid!!!  I’ll be surprised if someone doesn’t record this, and have at least somewhat of a hit with it—ESPECIALLY like the line “If there’s someone else, at least there’s someone else to blame”

August 02, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on Christmas From Prison

Nice!!!

August 02, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on No Waiting

Interesting, vocal reminds me a little bit of Jonatha Brooke (especially on the chorus and bridge)—I like it!

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