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Bob Abner

July 31, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on Have Mercy On Me (Money In The Bank)

1) Interesting song. 2) Did NOT like piano part on bridge (amateurish). 3) Lyrics grab my attention, more so than the music. 4) You might want to think about having someone who’s really solid musically to work on this song with you—your gift seems to be on the lyric side of the... Read More

July 31, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on Maybe That's Crazy

1) Anthony, I DO think your music is generally appealing. 2) Occasionally, your songs get a little too depressing (imho, this song is one of those). 3) This one seems a little “stiff” musically (never quite “gains fire/a spark.” 4) I DO think you are quite talented as a songwriter!

July 31, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on Life Is Fragile

1) Nice intriguing song. 2) Wish you had posted the lyrics (imho, allows the listener to be more connected to both the lyrics and the music). 3) Occasionally, small problems with vocal intonation (a little flat vocally). 4) I DID like your song—best wishes with your musical endeavors/songwriting.

July 30, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on Don’t Feel The Rain

fwiw, I didn’t get as much of a “taste and feel” of the song as I do from a number of your other songs—in other words, I didn’t feel as “connected” to the song as I have felt with a number of your songs—of course, remember... Read More

July 26, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on It's Okay To Have Nothing To Say

A nice quiet musical space of a song.

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