Bob Abner gave feedback on I'm Not Keeping Score

imho, the lyrics and the music are at odds with each other. Lyrically the song is about an important personal relationship, but musically the song is almost “flippant”—I noticed that I kept waiting for a sarcastic tone to creep in, because the singer is trying to say that the... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Breathe! Breathe! Breathe!

Sorry, but I couldn’t figure out what this song is about. Best of luck.

Bob Abner gave feedback on I Never Dreamed

Seemed a little awkward (harmonically) getting into the bridge. Best of luck in your musical endeavors.

Bob Abner gave feedback on Maybelline Tears

Actually, I think this one’s pretty solid, though I’m not sure where on radio airplay this one fits in—anyway, I liked it!!!

Bob Abner gave feedback on Take Me With You

Nice and heartfelt—only issue for me was that the bridge (Jesus and the thieves) seems a little weak (both lyrically and musically) in comparison to the first two verses. That notwithstanding, I am guessing that someone (singer) will be interested in recording this one. Best wishes in all your... Read More