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Dear Internet, you look a little stressed. Time to BREATHE! BREATHE! BREATHE!. Thanks, your Pal, HappyRon
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BREATHE! BREATHE! BREATHE!
by HappyRon
120PM
(potential lyrics in)
Verses
Sometimes you slip away from me
And I know you're not going someplace good
Your eyes drift away and you cannot see
The truth I hoped you would
Chorus
You just need to see
And you just need to be seen
and Breathe! Breathe! Breathe!
VERSE 2
Lets just agree l that I'll stay here (make a deal)
And give you the safety that you need (port, shelter)
So you can drift past all your fears (sail past, though?)
And no longer need to bleed
BRIDGE
Who told you it was your fault
What happened so long ago (it happened..)
(How) can you feel shame (so why should you)
(When) you were too young to know? (for something you couldn't know)
(things you were to young to know)
VERSE 3
Someday you'll stay here with me
And won't head back to the night
Being in the now is all you need
So stay here in the light
ENDING
Sometimes you slip away from me
So breathe! breathe! breathe!
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Ronald Hill
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March 27, 2019
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