Bob Abner gave feedback on We Were

Will be interested in hearing any other songs you post here on Frettie.com

Bob Abner gave feedback on We Were

P.S.—also, not particularly fond of the line “Thomas Rhett on the jukebox”

Bob Abner gave feedback on We Were

Hey Trevor, nice song—lyrics are solid, chorus is musically catchy. One thing I noticed in listening to the chorus: “They said we were young…sunset fading away” is musically a great set-up for the last line in the chorus, but then it seemed that “Yeah that summer wasn’t... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Look At The Love We're In

Hey Marvin, as always, you’ve turned out another very solid song—your level of songwriting consistency is impressive. One small note—the third line in your chorus (“Just look at all where we’ve been, through the years”) seems somewhat awkward—just speak the line, and it seems to... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Sleeping with a Stranger

Hi Alexsi, I could tell that you’ve put in some time and effort into choosing your words. One thing that jumped out at me—your chorus is musically repetitious (5 lines which are all the same musically). Best wishes with your songwriting!