Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Dream Lady

Hey Howard,  sounds like a song from the early 70ies. I like the vibe and especially the Sax. Hard to tell which artist I would compare it to, maybe because of the sax it reminds me to Curtis Stigers. But there’s also some Glen Cambell in it and... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Next Step

Hey Jerry, nice song. I think the lyric would be stronger if you would tell in the first person. The way you did it here sounds a bit like preaching. The chorus could stand out more. Michael Lusk is great singer for this song!

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Once In a Lifetime

Hey Jerry, you are right, the music sounds damn good, a cool jazzy vibe. I’m not an expert for this genre, but I think it’s it sounds great!  Only the lyric is too cliche, I cannot find an original line. I think you made it too easy... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Run Away With You

Hey Jerry, nice sweet song, but I think it’s missing something original. I think it’s ok to use cliches sometimes, but here it may be way too much.

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on See Saw Life

Hi Jerry, yep the structure of this song is somewhat unusual. What you call a chorus doesn’t sound like a chorus and your verses sound more like the real chorus cause of the repeated ‘sea saw’ line. The question is: does it matter? I don’t think so. ... Read More