I was recently blessed to marry the very best woman for me! We had the wedding at the house, and the preparation and planning was getting a little overwhelming, and I went to my piano and wrote this song. I feel it has a great hook, and chorus. Just a fun expression of love.
All feedback is appreciated.
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Run Away With You
Jerry Stenger (ascap) 2018
V1
Where would I be without you in my life
How lucky I feel to make you my wife
This feeling I have is so strong inside
The love you give makes me realize.
Chorus
I just wanna run away with you,
I just want to be with you
I just wanna run away with you
I just want to be with you.
V2
Words can not say what I feel right now,
The beauty I see, just makes me smile,
How lucky I am, with you by my side,
Today is the day, we start a lifetime
Chorus
I just wanna run away with you,
I just want to be with you
I just wanna run away with you
I just want to be with you.
Bridge
From LA to Queens
Or somewhere in-between
As long as you’re with me
That answers all my dreams
Solo
Chorus 2X
I just wanna run away with you,
I just want to be with you
I just wanna run away with you
I just want to be with you.
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Hey Jerry, nice sweet song, but I think it’s missing something original. I think it’s ok to use cliches sometimes, but here it may be way too much.
June 22, 2019
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Frank Renfordt
Hey Jerry, nice sweet song, but I think it’s missing something original. I think it’s ok to use cliches sometimes, but here it may be way too much.
June 22, 2019
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