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Next Step

Jerry Stenger

February 09, 2019

Genre: Country

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The story behind this song began in 2009 when I was going thru my 2nd divorce, almost lost my business due to the economic downturn, and decided to go to a seminar in Cincinnati that was on personal development. Transformational to say the least. My life and relationships have changed for the better and continue to everyday. Next Step is about having the courage to live your life to the fullest.

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Frank Renfordt

Hey Jerry, nice song. I think the lyric would be stronger if you would tell in the first person. The way you did it here sounds a bit like preaching. The chorus could stand out more. Michael Lusk is great singer for this song!

June 22, 2019

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Verse 1
Open your mind to the changes,
That you feel in your heart
Light up the gifts you are given,
Don’t be afraid to start

Chorus
Paint your days with bright colors
And dull the sharpness you feel
Spend your days with others
And share your ideals
Take your Next Step to freedom
Let life be so real

Verse 2
Let harsh words you have spoken
Fade with the light of day
Find the trust that is broken
Love them more anyway

Chorus

Change
Fight all that you want to
This life’s just for you
I’ll be there when you need me.
Together we are the glue

Verse 3
Feel the light that’s inside you
Maybe for the first time
Let your smile shine through to
Everyone at all times

Chorus

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Frank Renfordt

Hey Jerry, nice song. I think the lyric would be stronger if you would tell in the first person. The way you did it here sounds a bit like preaching. The chorus could stand out more. Michael Lusk is great singer for this song!

June 22, 2019


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