Once in a Lifetime is the dance song for your wedding or anniversary. I am so grateful to those talented musicians who make my music sound, in my opinion, so damn good.
I would like feedback on the whole song please. Thank you for your time.
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Once in a lifetime, You'll find someone so special
Your lives will intermingle, and somehow you'll know
This is the beginning, of all you have longed for
A love that you can build on, a love that will grow,
A love that will grow
Once in a lifetime, to those who are so lucky
A miracle that happens , and all your dreams come true
I know this can happen, it happened to me and you
For I found that someone, Once in a Lifetime with You,
Once In A Lifetime With You.
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Hey Jerry, you are right, the music sounds damn good, a cool jazzy vibe. I’m not an expert for this genre, but I think it’s it sounds great! Only the lyric is too cliche, I cannot find an original line. I think you made it too easy for yourself.
June 22, 2019
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Frank Renfordt
Hey Jerry, you are right, the music sounds damn good, a cool jazzy vibe. I’m not an expert for this genre, but I think it’s it sounds great! Only the lyric is too cliche, I cannot find an original line. I think you made it too easy for yourself.
June 22, 2019
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