Joined: February 3, 2018
Frank Likes: 56 Songs
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on I CAN HEAR HER HUMMING
Hey Laramie, thank you for sharing your song with us. I like the chorus and the hook of the song - ‘hearing the fat lady humming’ - that’s a pretty cool idea! You could use some more pictures in the verse lyrics and show us the little signs why... Read More
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Cold
Hi Les, nice melody and I really can imagine how the chorus will sound with a great singer. I have the same problem; I’m not a big singer too. I would recommend to shorten the song a bit, maybe you don’t need a third verse. The lyric could... Read More
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on He Gave Her Flowers
Hey Kirk, a wonderful simple heart touching story! English is not my mothertongue, but even I had no problems to understand your story. Very nice!
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on On Nights Like This
Hey Laramie, yeah, this feeling comes across! I think the song needs to be produced with more instruments, especially to separate the sections a bit more. The way it is, it is hard to tell where the verse ends and the chorus starts. But overall it has a good vibe!