Joined: June 7, 2013
Dick Likes: 50 Songs
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Don't Fail Me Now
I definitely hear Bruno Mars influence here (vocal, chord progression….). For critique, I think it’s too short. Consider adding a bridge (maybe just musical - maybe vocal) and then go back into the chorus (without the PC). While I like it, the PC might be a little long. Just... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Make Me Wait
Totally agree with Alyssa. But I have to add that you are such a wordsmith. You blow me away with lines like: “Such a shame you know how sound drowns the drinking out” and “Tonight your rough as sand and tender as a bruise”. Another great song.
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Cold, Cold Wind
I’ve told you this before and I’ll say it again. This is a great song! I also think it is highly commercial, especially with the production you did on this version. You should be pitching this song in Nashville (or somewhere). I have no suggestions to make... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Start Living
I like that idea. There are a lot of people in Nashville who think there are too many ballads and that the public wants to hear more uptempo songs. I don’t know if that’s really true, but it was an interesting point of view.
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Erik #2
Andrew - cool, different song. I love the way you build it from a chord per measure to the full orchestra-like sound. I also think it is very clever the way you used a play or Broadway production metaphor to sing about “unrequited love”. I think it really works. I... Read More