Joined: June 7, 2013
Dick Likes: 50 Songs
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Can't Write A Song
Man - I’ve become an Alyssa fan. I love this song, too. In particular, I think you have some really neat rhymes in here. I also think your production is very cool (particularly all the different guitar parts in the beginning). The only thing I would critique is that... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Your Only Girl
Alyssa - I love this song! The mandolin over the uke (I think I hear that) is genius - such a great sound. And in the verses where you go: “outta my head, no outta my head” really spices up the groove and melody. This is just a happy, uptempo,... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Life I love
Dennis - good self critique. I think you have a really good chorus. It paints a bunch of vivid images. My only problem with the song is that I think you have two different songs here. Your verses are about 2 people being torn apart by something (sad/tragic). Your chorus... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Falling Down
Orion, Love the groove. Love your phrasing. The only thing that bothered me (minor thing) is that you contradict yourself. In the chorus you say: “I will never fall down”. Yet in the second verse, you say: “I will fall down and get up again”. Maybe to keep the thought,... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on I Made It
Darby - good song and great production. I love the rap in the middle. My only input would be that I felt the chorus should stand out a little more from the verses. Actually the last time you do the chorus is how I would have liked to have heard... Read More