Dick Plunk gave feedback on Going Up

JT - beautiful lyric and melody. I (as usual) really like your guitar work. Also, the harmony you sparsely added really works. Critiquewise - because nothing is repeated (except what I think is a tag at the end), I couldn’t tell what was verse, pre-chorus, or chorus. That does... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Start Living

I understand the premise that we all need to stop and relax now and then. We all need to recharge our batteries every so often. But it seems to me that if one is chasing his dreams, he is living (unless the dream is a false dream). I think what... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on OK

I think your writing is very creative. This song has so many things going for it - a really neat, lazy guitar groove, a simple but moving melody, and lot of story packed into sparse, clever lyrics. The one word start to each verse really works. And lines like: “the... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Irreplaceable

Andrew - what a great song! The piano fills are perfect and really build momentum. And I love the way you stretch out the word “irreplaceable”. I also love the melody throughout. My only critique points would be: I would suggest that you find more lyric instead of repeating the... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on This Time Around

Okay - interesting. I felt that the first version expressed attitude, but kind of a softer attitude. The newer version takes it to a new level, but, to me. a level of bitterness versus just edginess. While I really like this song (either way), I prefer the softer attitude. I ... Read More