Joined: June 7, 2013
Dick Likes: 50 Songs
Vocals, guitar, banjo, and a little bass
Folk music from the 50's, rock music from the 60's, 70's, and 80's, and country music from the 90's and 00's.
Dick Plunk gave feedback on A Good Ole Boy Like Me
You already got some great feedback. I agree with Sarah’s comments wholeheartedly. I also think’s Benny’s comment about the wording in the chorus is strong input. I guess the only thing I might offer is that you have a “drinking verse” and a “jail verse” and then... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Shipwreck
Joey - really neat, haunting melody and chords. The idea of “getting someone out of your consciousness” is very universal and should resonate with lots of listeners. I think you could use your last verse (or parts of it) as the bridge, with a different melody, of course. The only... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Truth Carries All
Jack - I really like the idea of hearing one side of a conversation (kind of like sitting on a bus next to someone on a cellphone). And I think you have a neat melody. I think the lyric might be a little too vague. I was struggling to figure... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on More Like Home
Really pretty melody and good visuals. The only critique I have tis that you keep changing pronouns which is confusing. You start out with “I” then change to “you”. Then the chorus shifts to “my” with the second verse going back to “you”. I wasn’t sure if there was... Read More