Dick Plunk gave feedback on When You Call

Ralf, This is really cool. I love your production and your mysterious, clever lyrics. My only critique point is that I don’t think your chorus (at least, I think the “meek and the crazy” part is a chorus) provides enough of a musical differentiation from your verses. Because of... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Burn

This is really cool. It has a compelling groove, interesting lyrics, and a good, solid melody. The only thing I would consider changing is the melody of the beginning of the chorus “you’d burn this city down…”. It sounds like you are still in the verse until you hit... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Geraldine

Daniel - good story telling, with a perfect match of the music feel and the story. It’s long, but I think most good story songs are (so we’ll forgive you - ha). Good song.

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Lost in Your Love

Sweet song with a very effective production. I only had two comments: First - I was a little baffled by the line “I’ll fix the past for you” - curious what you meant by that. Second - the chord at the end of the first line in the chorus... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Dreams

I want to support Dennis’ comment about hitting the chorus. Fact is, the melody in your second verse is more like what I would like to hear as a chorus melody. You take the melody up a little and emphasize it a little. I would suggest keeping the melody of... Read More