Maybe every songwriter should have at least one murder ballad.
Pretty cool. I like to write story ballads. Its fun to tell a story like this though music. Its an old fashioned folk sound. You had some clever lyrics in there. It is on the longer side, but thats ok. Maybe used the chorus a bit less to shorten it and keep the story line together. Thanks for sharing this.
March 08, 2014
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Daniel - good story telling, with a perfect match of the music feel and the story. It’s long, but I think most good story songs are (so we’ll forgive you - ha). Good song.
February 14, 2014
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Pretty cool. I like to write story ballads. Its fun to tell a story like this though music. Its an old fashioned folk sound. You had some clever lyrics in there. It is on the longer side, but thats ok. Maybe used the chorus a bit less to shorten it and keep the story line together. Thanks for sharing this.
March 08, 2014
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Dick Plunk
Daniel - good story telling, with a perfect match of the music feel and the story. It’s long, but I think most good story songs are (so we’ll forgive you - ha). Good song.
February 14, 2014