Idea: that girl you just can't get over...so you drink one...then another...then another. Produced by Pearl Snap Studios Nashville
Hi. Very descriptive here, I really like this overall, I love Bar stool beauty, fruity line. You do very well with your pictures.
My only suggestion is that I don’t hear 3 drinks into you as the title. It’s a good one, but as is, Im getting over hangovers seems like it is the title. If I weren’t reading the lyrics and seeing that you called it 3 drinks, I would have thought otherwise.
very good effort!
rk
September 19, 2019
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Alexsi, this is a really good idea. Since you produced it I assume this is your FINAL version of this? It’s hard cause I have definitive thoughts for this but not sure if that is what you want, or to just present it to us as a finished tune ???
September 19, 2019
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Thank you all for listening and for your feedback. I am open to any and all suggestions to make the song really shine!
September 20, 2019
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Alexsi, this is cool, I like the repeated lines in the verses that have slightly different meanings. I guess I want the number 3 to have some meaning, otherwise it could be 2, could be 4, could be 10. I see how it’s written, you have drinkin’ for 2 and then 3 drinks in… so it’s almost counting. But I don’t see a one, so I’m not sure that’s what you were going for. Cool tune! best of luck with it.
September 20, 2019
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3 Drinks Into You
Bartender, pour me another, hair of the dog, help me forget about her
Make it all a blur…
A double, whiskey soaked trouble
Crowded bar, lights down low, “sing-it-drunk” kinda songs on the stereo…
I’m gettin’ over, hangovers, cuz I can’t get over you
Flyin’ solo, still drinkin’ for 2
I’m gettin’ over hangovers
Guess I’ll always be...three drinks in...three drinks into you
Bartender, pour me another, straight clear ‘n strong, so I remember her
Yeah, the way we were…
My bar stool beauty, she liked ‘em fruity
Crowded bar, lights down low, “sing-it-drunk” kinda songs on the stereo…
I’m gettin’ over, hangovers, cuz I can’t get over you
Flyin’ solo, still drinkin’ for 2
I’m gettin’ over hangovers
Guess I’ll always be...3 drinks in...3 drinks into you
Starin’ at you, babe, it’s torture, scrollin’ through my phone
Won’t ya come back, until then, it’s bottoms up, alone…
I’m gettin’ over, hangovers, cuz I can’t get over you
Flyin’ solo, still drinkin’ for 2
I’m gettin’ over hangovers
Guess I’ll always be...3 drinks in...3 drinks into you
Crowded bar, lights down low, “sing-it-drunk” kinda songs on the stereo…
(Produced by Pearl Snap Studios, Nashville)
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Hi. Very descriptive here, I really like this overall, I love Bar stool beauty, fruity line. You do very well with your pictures.
My only suggestion is that I don’t hear 3 drinks into you as the title. It’s a good one, but as is, Im getting over hangovers seems like it is the title. If I weren’t reading the lyrics and seeing that you called it 3 drinks, I would have thought otherwise.
very good effort!
rk
September 19, 2019
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Alexsi, this is a really good idea. Since you produced it I assume this is your FINAL version of this? It’s hard cause I have definitive thoughts for this but not sure if that is what you want, or to just present it to us as a finished tune ???
September 19, 2019
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Thank you all for listening and for your feedback. I am open to any and all suggestions to make the song really shine!
September 20, 2019
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Alexsi, this is cool, I like the repeated lines in the verses that have slightly different meanings. I guess I want the number 3 to have some meaning, otherwise it could be 2, could be 4, could be 10. I see how it’s written, you have drinkin’ for 2 and then 3 drinks in… so it’s almost counting. But I don’t see a one, so I’m not sure that’s what you were going for. Cool tune! best of luck with it.
September 20, 2019
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Marilyn Oakley
Love your song, Alexsi. Great hook and great production.
September 19, 2019
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