This week I worked with three of Nashville's most talented players to track this new demo in the hope of pitching it to current artists such as Jon Pardi, Blake Shelton and possibly even the G-Man! Thank you Brent Rader, Jenee Fleenor and Mike Johnson for another great one!
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I always like everything I;ve heard of yours Marvin. I’m not sure exactly what no prisoner kind of love means, though, a little vague to me. just my opinion. Honestly I don’t know if you even need a bridge on this one. But it is a great hook for sure.
July 18, 2020
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Great song Marvin. Don’t really need to say anything more. You nailed it!
July 21, 2020
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Well I go bar hoppin' I don't get home till dawn
Runnin’ nonstop in places I don't belong
I got it made in the shade if the tree don't fall
Stayin' out late till the last call
I’m runnin' in the ground
Livin' it up on my way down
I live it up Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday night
But one day, Sunday, I stay, away - home to re-energize
I'm burnin' up this town, I'm renowned, as the king of the night, I wear the crown
I'm livin' it up, way up on my way down
I’m givin’ up workin’ that grind from nine to five
For spendin’ more time in the honkytonks and dives
I'm like a dog with fleas scratchin' away
Until that tree falls down one day
I’m stayin’ tightly wound
Livin' it up on my way down
I live it up Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday and Saturday night
But one day, Sunday, I stay, away - home to re-energize
I'm burnin' up this town, I'm renowned, as the king of the night, I wear the crown
I'm livin' it up, way up on my way down
I’m gonna keep on keepin’ on until I’ve had enough
Or until I stumble upon a no prisoner kind of love
I live it up Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday and Saturday night
But one day, Sunday, I stay, away - home to re-energize
I'm burnin' up this town, I'm renowned, as the king of the night, I wear the crown
I'm livin' it up - way up on my way down
I'm burnin' up this town, I'm renowned, as the king of the night, I wear the crown
I'm livin' it up, way up on my way down
All the way down
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I always like everything I;ve heard of yours Marvin. I’m not sure exactly what no prisoner kind of love means, though, a little vague to me. just my opinion. Honestly I don’t know if you even need a bridge on this one. But it is a great hook for sure.
July 18, 2020
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Great song Marvin. Don’t really need to say anything more. You nailed it!
July 21, 2020
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Dan Allen
Marvin, love the song and the hook!!!! Great demo also
July 10, 2020
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