Dan Heidt gave feedback on Carolina

Wistful is a great word for the emotion of this song.  I love your lyric style, the rhythm of your lines is pleasant to the ear and not choppy at all.. The only thing that didn’t really work for me was the percussive nature of the accompaniment. ... Read More

Dan Heidt gave feedback on Artificial Light

This song is pretty rad.  The Line (at least I think it flows this way) “You must act your age in a crowded place” connected the tone of the song and the ‘jumbled’ nature of the musical/textual line.  I got the image of a crowd of people... Read More

Dan Heidt gave feedback on shaking hands

The first time the additional harmony came in, I smiled. A very simple harmony on a simple (in a good way!) line.  That sucked me right into the song.  What took me out a little was the gradual additional voices that were added.  To me, that sounded... Read More

Dan Heidt gave feedback on Don't Give Up On Me Baby

Cool traveling song!  The only thing I think that didn’t work for me was the way your vocals paralleled the guitar.. It’s a great melody and guitar line, but hearing them both together was a little distracting.  I will normally try to counterpoint the guitar parts... Read More

Dan Heidt gave feedback on When You Believe in Me

I think the harp is a great introductory instrument (as well as one for the verses and instrumental loops), but the glissandos don’t necessarily work for me when the rhythms come in.  I like the tone of the song when it gets to the chorus, and the driving... Read More