Joined: June 4, 2013
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Dan Heidt gave feedback on Obvious To Me
Cool song, Matt… I’m ok with free verse, and rhyme schemes can almost even be distracting if one tries too hard, so that’s all cool with me… I will say that the one thing that came to my mind was that it sounded very ‘wordy’... Like there... Read More
Dan Heidt gave feedback on Don't Smile at Me
I don’t think the vocals are necessarily outdated. They sound natural… You aren’t trying to sound like someone other than yourself. The softness of them seem to work with this song, but I wonder if you have a more resonant and heavier tone for other songs.... Read More