Joined: May 1, 2017
Jackson Likes: 47 Songs
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Grind
Hey Corey, I am very grateful for your feedback, man! Really appreciate it a lot. To your points: You are right, mixing 1st, 2nd and 3rd person can be confusing, and I have done it a lot, and have been extra careful to fix it in editing. Grind is all ... Read More
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Down That Road
Nice song, especially like the piano outro… the rest reminds me that I, too, often do what is expected, not where I really want to go. Allow yourself to be who you are before you become a part of the Machine. You’ll have plenty of time to conform later.
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Grind
Brent, I did follow your advice on a positive grind in another lyric. It goes like this: Blessed I’m done and I haven’t done a thing today. Came to work, didn’t come to play, But somehow it didn’t turn that way, And now I’m scrambling... Read More
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Tangled Up With You
Hey Gregg, A pretty good song! Like it a lot. I agree with Brent just because I personally like things a bit more complicated and ambiguous, even though the genre seems to discourage that. Again, I like your work. Keep writing! Jack
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Hard Act to Follow
Richard, I like your song. I ‘hear’ a Birds/Eagles vibe with a 12-string and lush harmonies in a studio production. There are small things in the lyric, as Philip mentions, you may have to clean up, but for me the overall feel is there and I like it. Be... Read More