Joined: May 1, 2017
Jackson Likes: 47 Songs
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on I Can't Breathe (When You're Close to Me)
Hey Philip, I like your song very much and I think you are seriously underselling it. Irrespective of what everyone tells you, performance is what we all inevitably hear: compare anyone’s great song and an amateur performance of their song (the Bob, James Taylor, anyone) and ask yourself -... Read More
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on The Lighthouse Keeper
Hey Jeffrey, thanks very much. I like the voice too, but it’s not mine. Philip, My interest in writing commercial songs is not very high. I much prefer writing songs that affect people and mess with their hearts and minds. I am taking myself seriously, as you can see,... Read More
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on The Lighthouse Keeper
Hey Philip, You are spot on, man, I could not agree with you more. I am unhappy with the structure and the arrangement too. Unfortunately I did not get any help with either and learned my lesson the hard way. This is only my 2nd demo! Lyric needs some touch... Read More
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Antidote
It’s a beautiful song, and a great demo. Not familiar with the strictly pop environment, but thinking a good cut for Lady Antebellum, who seem to operate seamlessly in the country pop area.
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on The Lighthouse Keeper
Hey Brian, Many thanks for your comments and encouragement. The demo company definitely messed up some on this one, and did an even worse job on a third, so except the first, Grind, they have been a complete waste of money. It is probably partly my fault too as some... Read More