Joined: January 28, 2016
David Likes: 2 Songs
David Goodchild gave feedback on A Song of Praise
Hi Ryan. Thanks for posting your work up here. I’ve listened to your song a couple of times now and here’s my thoughts: It sounds like you have recorded all in one take. The vocals don’t come across as loud as the guitar so it is quite... Read More
David Goodchild gave feedback on Dead Man Walking
Always love a bit of positivity. I really like the feel of the ensemble that you have on here (especially the violin). There is a uke (or guitar / manolin?) following the vocal line on the chorus that is a little loud and drowns the lead vocal a little but other... Read More
David Goodchild gave feedback on Self-Inflicted Blues
Really nice gentle groove - lovely sounding guitar too.
David Goodchild gave feedback on I Welcome You In
Hi Martin Thanks for the song. I really like the melody and arrangement. From your pic I was expecting guitar but the piano works well to establish the melodic phrase. One thing I would say about the lyric is that there is a lot of ‘I’ in there. It... Read More
David Goodchild gave feedback on The Rescue Plan
Hi Mary. Thanks for taking the time to listen and for your kind words. I sort of tried to put some dynamics in the penultimate verse and you can kind of hear a melody line forming in the outro that could end up as a chorus instead. I’ll give... Read More