Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Tequila Nights (Edited)

Sonya, got to say I’m not a fan of the duet and liked the idea in the original version better.  I believe keeping the song in a female perspective gives it a better chance of success. In the bridge, “bring you all undone” is not natural speech. ... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Kissable or I Didn't Know

I know you wrote this to be a country song, but every time I read the lyrics, I keep hearing a pop song. Imagine a 120bpm track with synths and a good percussion beat: I didn’t know, I could be kissable I didn’t know, I was irresistible I... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Time Won't Heal This Time

Very nice.  I feel your loss. Phillip

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Don't Come Crying To Me

Michael, I like the theme and the upbeat tempo, but honestly, it kind of took me out of the song when the guy started chanting.  Since you didn’t post all the lyrics and I have to go by what I heard in the chant, it made me feel... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Ruby Slippers

Sounds pretty cool, but unfortunately, I’m pretty sure the phrase “ruby slippers” is trademarked by Turner Entertainment, who owns the rights to “Wizard of Oz”. Aside from all the “Oz” references, you could rewrite it and use “Golden Slippers”, but I’m not sure the audience would connect. ... Read More