Brent Baxter gave feedback on Oh California

Thanks for sharing your song with us, Howard! I think one thing that can “up” the emotion of the song is making her leaving more recent.  The 1st verse makes it clear that she left a while back.  I’d make the wound more fresh. Just a thought.... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Don't Feel The Rain (acoustic)

Hey, Marvin- thanks for sharing! Some good stuff here.  I like the thought of the 1st 2 verses, but the 3rd verse raises more questions than it answers.  Is the boy dying outside?  Why?  I’m too busy THINKING about that to FEEL the emotion of the... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Love Two Point oh

Hey, Richard- thanks for sharing your song with us!  I get what people say about using more tech jargon because of the title.  But that would also give it more of a novelty vibe if it isn’t done well.  And I think enough people get the “2.0”... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Man In The Moon

Hey, Denis!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  Nice imagery in the 1st verse- I can see it (and relate to it).  I wonder, though, if the story in that verse needs to be more ‘on-point.’  Instead of the Superman thing, what if it shows... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on (Anything Goes in a) Beach Town

Hey, Keith!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  I dig your overall idea.  I don’t know if you’re aiming for this to be something another artist could record or not, but if it is… I’d consider changing the part about “I’m the... Read More