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Randall Johns

August 07, 2014

Randall Johns gave feedback on Carolina

Dick, thank you for your feedback and generosity in complimenting some of my lines. I try to be fresh and avoid cliches’, but like most folks, it’s a challenge and I fall into that trap all too often. BTW, I agree Dan would be great on this. He is... Read More

August 07, 2014

Randall Johns gave feedback on Carolina

Dan, thank you… and I totally agree about the accompaniment. It isn’t even a guitar, but a synthesized guitar sound, and too upfront at that. Thank you for your encouragement and kind words. I agree this song would shine much brighter with a real acoustic guitar. Unfortunately, I don’... Read More

August 06, 2014

Randall Johns gave feedback on The Color of You

If I had one bit of constructive criticism, it would be that the groove in the verse led me to believe the chorus would rock a little bit and it was laid back instead. That’s really a demo issue though and no reflection on your writing. Love the lyric.

August 06, 2014

Randall Johns gave feedback on The Color of You

Nice visuals, Dick. Thanks for tickling my senses. Great demo too.

August 06, 2014

Randall Johns gave feedback on Turn Around

Eat your heart out, Crosby, Stills, and Nash.

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