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Randall Johns

July 01, 2016

Randall Johns gave feedback on Mississippi Moon

Thank you, Herman. That’s mighty kind of you.

August 31, 2014

Randall Johns gave feedback on Our Voices

Love the lyric. I think you have a bit of poet it you. And I mean that as a big compliment.

August 31, 2014

Randall Johns gave feedback on Hey You

Very nice, a touch of Dylan and Young. Nice organic lyric. I like it.

August 09, 2014

Randall Johns gave feedback on Song For Lucy

Interestingly, I never thought of this song as commercial, but got an absolutely glowing critique on it by a successful L.A. songwriter/producer. He told me I “should write more songs like this.”  I always assumed the story was too personal and specific to appeal much to others.... Read More

August 08, 2014

Randall Johns gave feedback on Freethe Children

Ross, I have to agree with Dennis, some of verse lines are too abstract. “Scared like the moon?” I have to be honest; I don’t know what that means. Is the moon frightened of something? I might could see, “scared BY the moon.” That’s still a little abstract,... Read More

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