Joined: August 5, 2014
Randall Likes: 4 Songs
Randall Johns gave feedback on Our Voices
Love the lyric. I think you have a bit of poet it you. And I mean that as a big compliment.
Randall Johns gave feedback on Hey You
Very nice, a touch of Dylan and Young. Nice organic lyric. I like it.
Randall Johns gave feedback on Song For Lucy
Interestingly, I never thought of this song as commercial, but got an absolutely glowing critique on it by a successful L.A. songwriter/producer. He told me I “should write more songs like this.” I always assumed the story was too personal and specific to appeal much to others.... Read More
Randall Johns gave feedback on Freethe Children
Ross, I have to agree with Dennis, some of verse lines are too abstract. “Scared like the moon?” I have to be honest; I don’t know what that means. Is the moon frightened of something? I might could see, “scared BY the moon.” That’s still a little abstract,... Read More
Randall Johns gave feedback on Mississippi Moon
Thank you, Herman. That’s mighty kind of you.