Joined: August 5, 2014
Randall Likes: 4 Songs
Randall Johns gave feedback on The Pluto Song (Me and Clyde)
An original song, the best kind! Good storytelling, Charlie. No criticisms from me.
Randall Johns gave feedback on Freddie's Foot Fetish
Ha! What a fun song. One small criticism. In the chorus, sing the words, “niche” and “fetish” more naturally, letting the accents fall where they normally do. It sounds a bit forced the way you sing those words, no doubt in an effort to emphasise ryhme. IMHO, natural sounding phrasing... Read More
Randall Johns gave feedback on Somewhere Green
Dick, thank you for listening and commenting. I appreciate that you listened closely enough to catch some of the nuances of the lyric and structure. I get what you are saying about the Bama football reference. I am a resident and fan, but what I was sort of thinking of... Read More
Randall Johns gave feedback on Shimmy Town
Dennis, I can tell by reading between your lines this isn’t your favorite kind of song. No worries; it isn’t mine either, not by a long shot. . I was just attempting to be current, a challenge for someone like me who is a half century old. That said,... Read More