Randall Johns gave feedback on Chasin' That Thang

PS - I did do a bit of rewriting after the female publisher’s comments and toned it down a little. I’m not sure if it was enough though. The thing is, I think there is a fine line I’m trying to tight rope across. I don’t... Read More

Randall Johns gave feedback on Start Living

Dennis, I really like this idea. One thought, you’ve already established that “you” (the singer) spend too much time chasing dreams, so why not leave that out of the first line of the chorus and jump straight into the meat of the idea, which would be, “Today, I start... Read More

Randall Johns gave feedback on That’s Love

Dennis, I can’t get this song to play, but I really like the lyric and the idea. I love short phrases in a lyric.Short phrases usually lend themselves to a better melody than longer phrases, even though long phrases seem to be all the rage these days, and... Read More

Randall Johns gave feedback on Somewhere Green

Dennis, I can hear George singing this too. In fact, I pitched it to a song plugger looking for material to pitch to George. Unfortunately, it didn’t make the cut. I agree with you on the “Roll Tide” reference. I think referencing something that specific lends to the authenticity... Read More

Randall Johns gave feedback on Fly Me to Where You Are

Thank you so much, Dennis. Obviously, this song holds a special place in my heart, and it makes me feel good that at least one person appreciates what I was trying to do here. Yes, the lyric does capture, somewhat, my mother’s “essence.” The line you referenced is probably... Read More