Joined: June 22, 2014
Nigel Likes: 0 Songs
Nigel Parry gave feedback on Don't Give Up On Me Baby
A good folkie song. I don’t mind the vocals following the gat ,it is a recognised style, but the top C does come out as very dominant
Nigel Parry gave feedback on One Hundred & Three
Nice theme to the song and nice feel to the chorus. Flows gently, but the words take a bit of following (not always a bad thing, but the sound must draw people in to listen carefully).
Nigel Parry gave feedback on Wishful Thinking
Nice writing. The ‘sound’ got a little repetitive after a while - maybe look at add a little more variation?
Nigel Parry gave feedback on The Pluto Song (Me and Clyde)
Nice feel to the song and storytelling. Maybe at that pace it needs a little ‘something’ in the chorus.
Nigel Parry gave feedback on shaking hands
Really nice opening line and start of chorus. Good sound to your voice and nice harmonies that work well together. The chorus gets a bit lost in the middle. Strengthen that and you’ll have a good earworm.