A feel good life song.
Anything you'd like to let me know.
Nice theme to the song and nice feel to the chorus. Flows gently, but the words take a bit of following (not always a bad thing, but the sound must draw people in to listen carefully).
June 22, 2014
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Never knew just what it was that made me restless,but
all at once I had these things I had to know
And in the moment all these questions were running through my mind, and
I didn't think you'd mind at all.
so I asked...
How do the plants grow and
How do you always know when I'm mad or sad or feeling wrong.
How does the sun shine, and
All about the birds and the bees cause I wanna know just where you'll be
When I'm 103.
You smiled and laughed at me saying
Where do you think I'll be, But
That wasn't just enough for me
So I asked...
How do the plants grow and
How do you always know when I'm mad or sad or feeling wrong.
How does the sun shine, and
All about the birds and the bess cause I wanna know just where you'll be
When I'm 103.
You said baby, just let it be because...
I don't know just how things grow, But you've
Always let me know when you're made or sad or feeling wrong.
I love the sunshine, and watching the bees flying by, But
I think you'll know just where we'll be
When we're 103.
Sittin on that front porch swing.
When we're 103.
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I liked the chorus. It was really catchy. Had a nice flow to it. I did find it hard to grasp the story, perhaps giving the listener a tad bit more to go on would help. When I listen to the song, the 103 obviously is significant to the song, but I found myself asking why?
I hope that feedback helps.
June 08, 2014
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Nice theme to the song and nice feel to the chorus. Flows gently, but the words take a bit of following (not always a bad thing, but the sound must draw people in to listen carefully).
June 22, 2014
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Dennis Field
I liked the chorus. It was really catchy. Had a nice flow to it. I did find it hard to grasp the story, perhaps giving the listener a tad bit more to go on would help. When I listen to the song, the 103 obviously is significant to the song, but I found myself asking why?
I hope that feedback helps.
June 08, 2014
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