Nigel Parry gave feedback on Ship of dreams

Thanks, really appreciate your comments.

Nigel Parry gave feedback on The Music Tree

I like the treatment and the theme comes across clearly. The clean guitar accomp is just right too. The spoken intro works, matches the style of the vocal and leads in nicely.

Nigel Parry gave feedback on Mile After Mile

Using just 3 notes in the melody (verse and hook) makes it challenging to stick in the mind. Catchy hook though.

Nigel Parry gave feedback on Those Lost Downstream

The staccato emphasis (eg. ‘float or sink’ ‘lost downstream’) seems very heavy - could do with being softer or more subtle.

Nigel Parry gave feedback on Superman In Reverse

Nice idea. The chorus creeps in and is so long I had forgotten I was listening to the chorus.