Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Run Out

Hey Doug! Great song!! Love the title and everything that supports it in the chorus! I really dig your set up too… “I guess you ain’t the only thing that’s run out on me”. Really cool! I know since it’s demo’d, I’m sure you won’... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Paint Me The Rain

You have a great way with imagery and I get what you were doing, but without having a lyric sheet in front of us (as a radio listener), it would cement into the heart better I think if your imagery had something to do with your beautiful hook. Then we... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Paint Me The Rain

First, I totally love this title and how you write out of it “if you paint me the rain, I’ll draw you the sun”. That’s killer! You have a lot of great images, but my honest feedback is I feel the song could be as strong as your... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Farm Hands

Really cute Brent!  Big smile factor! Love verse two and examples of what those hands can do that don’t just involve sex… gives the character a sweet side.  Thanks for sharing!

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Cliches

Hi Sam. First, you have an indie pop sound which is cool… so my comments are with that in mind rather than for commercial country crafting.  Depending on how commercial you are trying to write will depend on feedback. For instance, if this were a country song the feedback... Read More