Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Titanic

I am a total novice and hardly qualified to comment but I usually write songs that are too long. I leave them sitting for a few days then go back and pick out the best lines to build a shorter version. Seems to help me to get more focus out... Read More

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Wishing Well (‘Til the Day I Die)

Joey has a good point (several others too) about the strong kick drum. I can hear a strong Irish drum throughout. The chorus will not seem so repetitive when you get the harmonies mixed in. Great work!

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on So Long

I have listened to two of your songs and I only have one complaint. I only have one more to listen to!

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Where the Moon Meets the Sun

Beautiful music. Nice lyrics. I’m just not sure they go together though. Seems like the lyrics want to rock the joint like a loud downtown club but the music wants to lie on the beach or stroll down a river walk!

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Say Goodbye & Walk Away

I seem to feel a conflict between, “Almost forgotten that time I made her cry” in verse 1 and, “Don’t make her cry” in chorus 1. This could be resolved by changing chorus 1 to, “I said goodbye, and walked away…......”. That change would work well with the 2nd chorus, “She said... Read More