Songwriting Pro: Helping Songwriters Turn Pro.

Join Songwriting Pro Today!

Write like a pro, do business like a pro & connect to the pros. Join the Songwriting Pro community today!

January 16, 2014

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on What's Your Alibi Tonight

Thanks Dennis. Point well taken. It really could use a bridge.

January 16, 2014

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Willy Don't Need No Shoes

Thanks Dick. That chord change that goes from F# to A is a little strange for a song done in E but I like it even if it does give a harmonica player fits!

January 16, 2014

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Sentimental Way

Dick, Thanks for commenting. Good points! I will have to do some rethinking to see if I can eliminate the sing-song rhyming and maybe double the length of the chorus.

January 16, 2014

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Song 55

Jacob, I love the laid back sound of this song enough that I actually listened to it more than once. I thought it sounded like John Prine meets Chris Christopherson. I was not bothered by the cliches at all and believe that your use of them was masterful. They fit... Read More

January 16, 2014

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Willy Don't Need No Shoes

Thanks for commenting. I didn’t intend for him to actually pick with his toes. Maybe I need to make that a little more clear.  I think Mary summed up the depth of this song! Work a little harder? OK.

Welcome back!

Username or Email:

Password:

×

Share this Frettie profile with others.

Like this songwriter? Share their music and profile with your friends, fans and fellow songwriters.

×

Purchase A Song Review from Benny.


Whoops!

Sorry about that, but you can't purchase a Song Review from yourself.

×