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Titanic

Greg Bikowski

January 02, 2014

Genre: Rock

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This song is about Alvin "Titanic" Thompson. He was a gambler, cardshark, pool hustler, and self-made man. Titanic hung out with the likes of Al Capone, Harry Houdini, Ben Hogan, and Minnesota Fats. He won and lost millions of dollars playing cards, dice, pool, golf, horseshoes, and whatever else he felt would win him money. He killed 5 men and married 5 women while traveling the US looking for one more game.


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Dennis Field

Greg,

Welcome to Frettie! I enjoyed this very much. The nice solo break was perfect for breaking this song up. Songs like this can feel long, but you did a nice job with all the subtle riffs.

Even so, I think you could probably nix a verse and it would be fine. Perhaps the “Harry Houdini…

You would then move from the solo and then right into the last verse which would make that stand out even more.

Thanks for sharing! I look forward to hearing your other music and feedback/contributions to Frettie.

January 02, 2014

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Greg Bikowski

Dennis,
Thanks. I always struggle with too long of songs. I appreciate the input. Hopefully, I get more songs up soon.

Greg

January 02, 2014

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Benny Pitsinger

I am a total novice and hardly qualified to comment but I usually write songs that are too long. I leave them sitting for a few days then go back and pick out the best lines to build a shorter version. Seems to help me to get more focus out of the songs. The flanger adds a nice touch to some good guitar fills.

January 15, 2014

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He rolled into town like a chilly wind, and everyone held their lips.
Money rolled up in his side pocket and a pistol on his hip.
Layin' em' down and swingin' 'round.
Slick was the name of the game
And he lived to play you the fool, Titanic

Married to five different women, he loved 'em with leather and lace.
He put five men underground all to just save face.
Any game of chance he could make the dice dance
He could look the devil in the eye.
And he lived to play you the fool, Titanic.

New Orleans, Chicago, St. Looey to Evansville.
Kansas City, Tulsla, Oklahoma anywhere they'd foot the bill.
Shuckin' the big boys in big suits
that's how he laid his claim to fame
And he lived to play you the fool, Titanic.

Lay 'em on the table boys and tee it off the ground.
Eight ball in the side pocket boys and run 'em out of town.

Harry Houdini, Al Capone, Hogan, Floyd and little Lee.
Right of left he could know it down always had an ace up his sleeve.
Drivin' his Pierce Arrow
and running like there's no tomorrow
And he live to play you the fool, Titanic.

Well they buried Ti on a shady hillside, there was a preacher and his last wife.
Nobody knows how his legend lives on or if he's living a better life.
All these years have passed now,
but don't you ever think about it twice
Cause he lived to play you the fool, Titanic

Lay 'em on the table boys and tee if off the ground.
Eight ball in the side pocket boys and run 'em out of town.

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Dennis Field

Greg,

Welcome to Frettie! I enjoyed this very much. The nice solo break was perfect for breaking this song up. Songs like this can feel long, but you did a nice job with all the subtle riffs.

Even so, I think you could probably nix a verse and it would be fine. Perhaps the “Harry Houdini…

You would then move from the solo and then right into the last verse which would make that stand out even more.

Thanks for sharing! I look forward to hearing your other music and feedback/contributions to Frettie.

January 02, 2014

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Greg Bikowski

Dennis,
Thanks. I always struggle with too long of songs. I appreciate the input. Hopefully, I get more songs up soon.

Greg

January 02, 2014

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Benny Pitsinger

I am a total novice and hardly qualified to comment but I usually write songs that are too long. I leave them sitting for a few days then go back and pick out the best lines to build a shorter version. Seems to help me to get more focus out of the songs. The flanger adds a nice touch to some good guitar fills.

January 15, 2014


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