Doug Folkins gave feedback on Gravel Rose

Hey Fox, Maybe have a look at writing this lyric in the 3rd person.  Right now, you are in 1st person talking to “you” aka the girl.  Unfortunately the lyric doesn’t quite works as the conversation is telling her what she already knows. A 3rd person approach... Read More

Doug Folkins gave feedback on Run Out

Wow, thanks Jayne!  Those are my co-writers singing on the home studio demo.  I’m sure we can fix us that with either a re-sing or a lyric change to make it clearer.  I really appreciate your feedback,  Thanks for listening.

Doug Folkins gave feedback on Everyone Wins

Great sounding demo.  Is this you singing Holden?  Cool song.

Doug Folkins gave feedback on Hiatus (work tape)

Thanks for the feedback Holden.  I think we’ll definitely take another crack at a bridge.  I appreciate your input and suggestion on the “pages line”.  Good call

Doug Folkins gave feedback on Without Crowns

Thanks for the feedback Holden.  Great points and I really appreciate you taking the time to listen and provide your thoughtful insight.