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Forever More

Tim Dowling

April 25, 2023

Genre: Christian

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I wrote this for our wedding 30 yrs ago, and the recording is that old as well:)

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Any feedback is welcome. I've critiqued this over the years and would change some lyrics now but it's like a time capsule. It's what I love about songwriting.


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Rachel Cintula

I love the story of this song!

April 26, 2023

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Tim Dowling

Thanks Rachel

April 27, 2023

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Verse 1
The road I traveled with uncertainty unraveled here to you, and forever changed my life.
The road I traveled here has made me who I am, With all my heart, you love I now requite.
So we take our next step forward to a path that now unites.
Chorus
And I want you (and I want you), Beside me, Forever more.
Verse 2
Put you hand in mine. Take this ring to be a sign of common bond, fidelity and faith.
So in our days to come, as we embrace each fallen sun we will recall these promises we make.
So we take our next step forward, through the threshold of our lives.
Chorus
And I want you (and I want you), Beside me, Forever more.
Bridge
Forever more I’ll be beside you through the laughter and the rain.
Forever more I’ll lift your spirit when you cannot find your way.
Rest assured, I’ll be here Forever more
Verse 3
Sisters and brothers we are bonded to each other by His love and ever present Grace.
This simple truth transcends the obstacles and hidden bends we find along the path we take.
In a world that walks in shadows, let us follow in His light.
Chorus
And I want Him (and I want Him), Beside me, Forever more.
Outro
Dearly beloved we are gathered here this day to witness love.

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Rachel Cintula

I love the story of this song!

April 26, 2023

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Tim Dowling

Thanks Rachel

April 27, 2023


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