I remember once showing up to a favorite store only to find it had gone out of business. Got to thinking...what if that happened with people?
I never return to the verse after the first chorus, and am wondering whether that was enough.
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Showed up at your heart but it was closed
Thought it might reopen later on
But it was still locked when I returned
Don't know how long it will be gone
I don't understand it cause I swear
It was open just the other day
And I had no clue that things had changed
And now your heart has run away
Hearts gone out of business
Nothing sitting on the shelf
All I'm left with are cobwebs
To clean up all by myself
I had no warning signs your heart was struggling
I could’ve helped or at least I could have tried
But now it's too late, the place is empty
I didn't even get a chance to say goodbye
Hearts gone out of business
Nothing sitting on the shelf
All I'm left with are cobwebs
To clean up all by myself
Hearts gone out of business
The world’s most painful surprise
All I'm left with is nothing
But the tears in my eyes
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