I wrote this one for no particular reason. It's theme is simple... A man's selling points for trying to gain the attention of his object of affection. I originally wrote this on an acoustic guitar with the riff of Neil Diamond's song 'Cherry, Cherry' but later, changed it around with electronic drums in the verses and real drums kicking in over the chorus.
Any thoughts or suggestions would be highly appreciated! Thanks.
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Tell me what’s wrong with you tonight...
Say good lovin’ will make you feel alright...
Seems it’s been a long time overdue...
Look out girl, Good Lovin’ Comin’ Thru...
Say you need a good lovin’ man...
Someone to hold you and say he understands...
I’m the one that’s gonna give it to you...
Look out girl, Good Lovin’ Comin’ Thru...
Look out girl, Good Lovin’ Comin’ Thru...
(CHORUS)
Say you need someone to rely on...
Shoulder you can dry your eyes on...
Someone who can help you see it through...
Man to help you beat the bad times...
Pillow for your head at sad times...
Can’t you see that I’m the one for you... The one for you...
(BREAK)
(CHORUS)
Say you need someone to rely on...
Shoulder you can dry your eyes on...
Someone who can help you see it through...
Man to help you beat the bad times...
Pillow for your head at sad times...
Can’t you see that I’m the one for you...
The one for you...
If you see what I’m trying to say...
Realize girl, there’s no better way...
I’m the one here lookin’ at you...
Look out girl, Good Lovin’ Comin’ Thru...
Yeah Look out girl, Good Lovin’ Comin’ Thru...
Said Look out girl, Good Lovin’ Comin’ Thru... To you...
Comin’ Thru... To you...
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