Eric (aka dolylamby's posse) Lamb
December 04, 2020
Genre: Alt-Country
I wrote this one after many nights of playing bars and seeing guys and girls go back and forth in their efforts to 'socialize' for the night. I wanted to write about a mutual happy ending! I call this a male/female/duet rapping/bar love song.
Is this the right approach instrumentally? I wanted a raw guitar thing going on and then build it up throughout to the end with pedal steel and fiddle to a big finish at the end. Does it work?
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(HIM)
I don’t mind that you’re a secretary...
I don’t care what your last name is...
I just see that your legs are very...
Long and slender way up past the knees...
Would you like to come home with me...
Would you like to come home with me...
(HER)
I don’t mind if your boots are dirty...
I don’t even care that your teeth aren’t straight...
I just know that this party’s over...
I’m all alone and it’s getting late...
Would you like to come home with me...
Would you like to come home with me...
Would you like to come home with me...
Would you like to come home with me, baby...
(BOTH)
He said yeah... Oh yeah...
She said yeah... Oh yeah...
He said yeah... Oh yeah...
She said yeah... Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh yeah...
(BREAK)
(HER)
You can see that I’ve been drinking...
A shot or two or maybe three...
A girl like me needs a real strong cowboy... honey...
(HIM)
A girl like you needs a guy like me...
Would you like to come home with me...
Would you like to come home with me...
Would you like to come home with me, baby...
Would you like ta... Would you like ta...
Would you like ta... Would you like ta...
Baby...
Honey...
Sugar...
(BREAK)
(HER)
Baby, can you see by the way I’m standin’...
That I’m much more girl than you’re used to handlin’...
(HIM)
Honey, can you see the way I’m lookin’ at you...
That I’m just the right man to do it for you...
(BOTH)
Would you like to come home with me...
Would you like to come home with me... Baby...
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