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STRAWBERRY FIELDS AGAIN (male vocals)

Eric (aka dolylamby's posse) Lamb

March 10, 2021

Genre: Country

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PEACE AND LOVE COULD RULE AGAIN! THIS ONE SUGGESTS GOING BACK TO A BETTER TIME...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8s0bX9KNPiM

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I POSTED THIS SONG WITH A FEMALE VOCAL THAT WAS MORE COUNTRY POP AND I WOULD LOVE TO GET YOUR OPINION ON IF THIS MALE VERSION COMES OFF BETTER TO THE EAR..... MALE OR FEMALE?


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Uncle Brent ...

Hi Eric,
I like the dude version.  It felt like the verse tempo was rushed but it works well on the Bridge and Chorus.  Great vocal tone and scream going into the solo … Yes, to the guitar solo!  My favorite line is “Just another Hard Days Night again”

Thanks,
Uncle Brent

March 11, 2021

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STRAWBERRY FIELDS AGAIN (male vocals)

Written by Eric (aka dolylamby's posse) Lamb

STRAWBERRY FIELDS AGAIN

I’ve been told back in times before me...
Love was in the air and life was easy...
All you wanted to have was some fun...
But as time went on we all got older...
And it seems the world’s so much colder...
Everything you worked so hard for...
Seems to have come un-done...

(Bridge)
Is it any wonder...
That we’re in the kind of state we’re in...
What happened to the thunder...
In a storm that swept the world...
The thought that Peace and Love would rule again...
So...

(Chorus)
Take me back to Strawberry Fields again...
Peace and Love was in the air...
Everyone a friend...
Take me back to Strawberry Fields again...
Make our world a better place...
We can do it all again...

Times today have gotten so much rougher...
To survive we’ve gotten so much tougher...
Just another Hard Days Night again...
But it all can be better somehow...
We just have to get back on track now...
We can work it out...
With a little help from our friends...

(Bridge)
(Chorus)
(Break)
(Repeat 1st half of Chorus to end)

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Uncle Brent ...

Hi Eric,
I like the dude version.  It felt like the verse tempo was rushed but it works well on the Bridge and Chorus.  Great vocal tone and scream going into the solo … Yes, to the guitar solo!  My favorite line is “Just another Hard Days Night again”

Thanks,
Uncle Brent

March 11, 2021


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