A song about how, while I was in High School, my best friend and I would lay out in my backyard and talk about the vastness of space. How we were foolish, young, and naive. Lyrics are still meh, this is rough with a main focus on form and melody.
I don't know, this isn't done, it's an idea. It could go somewher, but who knows.
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I don't even remember what I said.
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